WALT write a timed recount about a time
when we did something special with our whanau or family.
Write about:
·
when and where you did something special
·
who was with you
·
what you did (think about the order you did things)
·
how you felt and why you felt this way.
By Aysha Henderson
Greymouth
I went to
Greymouth with my dad to see my cousins and Nana and my Aunt because I have not
seen them in ages. Their names are Jessica, and James. My Aunt’s name is Linda
and my Nana’s name is Diana. I slept in Jessica and James’ room that have a
bunk bed. I slept with Jessica. Jessica is older than James and we all like the
pool and Nana had a pool. Then Aunt took us shopping to get a dress for me and
Jessica. We got to choose which one. I wanted the colourful one and Jessica
wanted the flower one that was pink. Then we went to the pet store to look at
some puppies. I liked the blue American Staffie and Jessica the same one. Then
we went back home to get in the spa pool because it was very hot that day. I
felt very happy. Well James and Dad went fishing. Then at dinnertime we had
McDonalds for tea. Then we watched a movie and then it was bedtime because we
have a big day tomorrow and we had McDonalds for breakfast.
Next
steps
Try to start sentences in different ways –
You have used “Then” 5 times.
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